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Writing a News Story

The question on newspaper story is of 6 marks in the SEE examination. Generally a news story has the following parts:

Headline :   Your headline for the news story must be attractive and eye-catching.

Place        :    The name of the place, where the story occurred or is filed from, must be written.

Date         :    You must mention the date of your story.

Source : The source must be clearly written i.e. who gave you or where did you get the story from?

Body : The first sentence of the body generally describes the headline. Other sentences must give the background and detail for the headline. The language must be simple and grammatically correct.

Useful Tips for writing News Reports

l    Go through the given outlines very carefully and try to understand events, message or information clearly.

l    Give the news report a headline like "Seven Dies in a Bus Mishap". Sometimes the headline may be given at the top of the clues.

l    Mention the location/ place from where you get the report, then date and source (dateline). If these are not given in the outlines, point them out with imagination.

l    Start your report cautiously and remember that the first sentence of the report should give a clear idea to the reader what the news is about.

l    Connect the points given in the outlines as naturally as possible.

l    Quote the sentences by the source using inverted commas.

l    The information and analysis should be actual and accurate.

l    Be brief.

l    Avoid giving your own judgement and opinions but you can raise important issues and leave the decision to be made by the readers.

l    Do not attack a person or label allegations unless you are sure and it is unavoidable. The report should be fair.

l    Be grammatically correct and simple in language.

l    Remember passive voice is more frequent in news story writing.

 

Solved Examples

Write a news story using the information given in the boxes below. Also give your story a suitable title:

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Text Box: A night bus (8465 BA)................ skidded off the road	12 died on the spot
............. two died in the hospital	khalasi and driver in the police custody.

FOURTEEN KILLED IN A BUS ACCIDENT

Birgunj, Sep 18 (Himalayan News Service):

A night bus registered as 8465 BA of Makalu Transport Pvt. Ltd. skidded off the road near Parbanipur, a place near Birgunj, and fell into the river pushing the death toll to twelve on the spot, our official reported it today.

The ill-fated bus left Kathmandu to Birgunj carrying thirty passengers.   It skidded off the road and fell into the river thirty feet below. Twelve people died on the spot and many were injured in the accident. The injured are under the treatment and two have already died in the hospital. Arjun Singh, one of the passengers said, "The accident occurred because the driver was drunk."

The driver and the khalasi have been kept in the police custody for the legal investigation.

Hemanta Rokaya 22 killed, Tanahun, Anbu Khairani

Local people obstructed traffic for 11 hours, ambulance set on fire by angry people, no casualty, traffic resumed after 5 pm

 
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Traffic Obstructed For Eleven Hours

Tanahun, Dec 9 Himalayan News Service

Hemanta Rokaya, 22, was killed on the spot when a vehicle hit him at Anbu Khaireni Bazaar on Friday. It has been reported that the angry locals obstructed the traffic for almost 11 hours putting hundreds of passengers stranded. According to an eyewitness, an ambulance, carrying a serious person, was set on fire. However, there has been no report of any casualty. The traffic resumed only after 5 pm and the situation has turned to normal.

 

 

Nine Expedition teams- granted permission to climb Mt Everest- information issued by Ministry of Tourism and Civil Aviation- 6 US teams, 3 teams from UK, Japan and France scaled Mt Everest- clean up rubbish-welcomed and received by Ministry of Tourism at base camp- Each team awarded token of love and cash prizes

 
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Nine Teams Scaled Mt Everest

Kathmandu, 20 December (RSS)

Nine expedition teams from different countries were granted permission to climb the world’s highest peak-Mt Everest. According to the information issued by the Ministry of Tourism and Civil Aviation, nine teams, six from the United States, one each from UK, Japan and France successfully climbed the world’s highest peak. Mr. Serge Bauds, a US mountaineer, got snow-bite while climbing down to the base camp. The teams also cleaned up the rubbish in a campaign to save its environment, sources said. The Minister of Tourism heartily welcomed and received all the successful mountaineers at base camp. They were also given a token of love and cash prizes worth Rs.50000 each.

Exercises for further Practice

Given below are the clues. Write news story of each and give your story a suitable heading.

Na 1 Kha 8796 passenger bus left for Pokhara from Kathmandu-   fell down below the road in a diversion - at 7.30 am, yesterday - owing to brake failure 14 died; 7 injured - compensation announced

Text Box: Na 1 Kha 8796 passenger bus left for Pokhara from Kathmandu-   fell down below the road in a diversion - at 7.30 am, yesterday - owing to brake failure 14 died; 7 injured - compensation announced

Practice 1

Practice 2

Text Box: Thirty-two passengers injured…. mini-bus veered off the road…..fell 60 meters down a hill……….Nagarkot VDC, Bhaktapur…..bus headed for Kathmandu from Nagarkot…..out of 20 passengers admitted to Kathmandu Medical College, Sinamangal….4 serious…….12 admitted to Bhaktapur District Hospital.

Text Box: The Dhaka SAG 2008 ……Cricket to be included….. It is hoped cricket giants India, Pakistan, Sri Lanka will send their teams…. India has given its go ahead………organizers would discuss with the countries and ICC …….finalise the schedule…… all SAARC countries will participate.

Practice 3


 

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